Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Blood on my Shirt

I can still feel the scars, even though you can't really see them. They've faded a lot, and they are barely noticeable. But I can still feel them.

I didn't even see it coming. One second I was petting the dog's back, the next it was latched onto my face. It was a pretty big dog; the canine's mouth enveloped my face, everything was dark and smelled like saliva. As I pulled away, the beast growled and I felt a ripping sensation.

I stood up in shock and stared at my friend. My face felt so weird. It didn't hurt really, it felt more like an odd pressure.

"What the--?" I managed to gasp.

I reached up to feel my nose. It felt like it had been smashed into my face. I gingerly touched my upper lip, right under my nose. When I pulled my hand down my fingers were covered in blood.

We rushed upstairs to get help. His dad rushed me back downstairs and into the bathroom. I looked at myself in the mirror. There I was, my face covered in blood and sweat, both dripping onto my white shirt. Red roses of blood bloomed across the front of my shirt, making it stick to my chest.
As soon as I saw this, a wave of nausea hit me, forcing me to sit down. I felt like I was going to throw up or pass out.

My face was sewn up at the hospital. I sat in the waiting area for the emergency room, holding wet paper towels to my face. I was called into a room. In order so that the doctors could stitch me up, they had to inject local anesthetics directly into each cut. One gash was in my cheek, the other next to my right eye, running down the side of my nose. The apex of the wound was five millimeters away from my eye. I had to get twelve stitches. Isn’t it strange that we remember these trivial things like the number of stitches we get? This happened to me five years ago, and yet I still remember how many sutures I got.

We had to throw the bloody shirt away. There was no way to wash the blood out.

For a while, I couldn’t be around dogs without being afraid. However, all these years later, my family might end up getting a dog. Now I can be around dogs without freaking out, as long as they are small and do not bite. My girlfriend’s dog and I have become best of friends.

Even though the dog bite was a traumatic experience, it helped me to grow. As they say, that which doesn’t kill you, makes you stronger.

5 comments:

  1. This is a scary story. I'd hate to have that happen to me. I like the sentence at the end, "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger." The paragraph above seemed a little awkward when you went from talking about smaller dogs to your girlfriend's. Overall, good story and you said it nicely with big words.

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  2. Wow. This must have been scary. It sounds like you have gotten over your fears well though. I felt like it's and awkward transition in the last two sentences of the second to last paragraph. I really like the last sentence, "that which doesn't kill you makes you stronger." Overall, well communicated.

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  3. This was really good!Your title is catchy, poetic and slightly misleading, but in a good way (similar to those in "Short Takes"). Your varied sense of vocabulary was really refreshing and made this post much stronger. I enjoyed how you took this traumatic event and made it into a learning experience. The quote at the end is a perfect way to end the story and keep the readers thinking. Keep it up!

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  4. Oh..I was wondering who the author of this blog was..and I guessed it so right! How did I know? Well Pincus, your vocabulary is always massive and I always learn new words. I loved every single sentence but only 'I felt like I was going to throw up or pass out.' this part would of been grammatically better if you had I was "either." Nice job! I can't believe you almost wrote a thriller about a canine which people wouldn't feel the suspense in everyday life.

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  5. Great job writing this post. The descriptions you used were awesome. I especially loved "Red roses of blood bloomed..." I was able to visualize the blood growing throughout the fabric of your shirt. Again, great job!

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